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    Post  Amanda Potter Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:15 pm

    Amanda walked in, sighed, then crawled into bed.
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    Post  Amanda Potter Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:28 pm

    Amanda woke up, doing he normal rountine then got to the part of brushing her hair. She was confused why she had so much books beside her bed... OWLS! "Gah...gah.." Amanda threw in her hairband and began to put on some chapstick. "Gaah..."
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:58 pm

    Kelsi woke up with her leg on the ground and her arm on her bed-side table. Her face was burrowed in her pillow and her blankets were tangled around her. She groaned and lifted her head up.
    "...It's morning..." Kelsi stood up in her position with the blankets still wrapped around her.
    "... OWLS..." She seemed pretty calm, yes and stood up to get dressed. The blankets were wrapped around her, and she walked to the mirror. The blankets ripped out of the bed and fell to the ground as she stepped over them.
    "Morning, Amanda. Jeez, this is gonna be scary." Kelsi groaned as she began to brush her teeth.
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    Post  Amanda Potter Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:59 pm

    "Gah. Gah. Gah. GHAHDASFNKDMSLA."
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    Post  Amanda Potter Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:00 pm

    Amanda grabbed an apple from her bag of mystersy, then began to jog out the door. "Cy-cy-a"
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:04 pm

    "No! Amanda! Wait!"
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:04 pm

    Kelsi was sleeping with her blankets still on the floor from the other morning. She had one arm stretched over her eyes and the other one rested along her stomach. Her feet were sprawled out and her shirt was pulled up to reveal her belly-button. She looked so soothing and relaxed, but the moment the alarm went off, she snapped up, slammed her fist onto the alarm clock. Kelsi suddenly looked relaxed again, and smiled. She has just hit inspiration.
    "Yeah, that's right. I've always needed a specific hobby." Kelsi swung her legs over the bed and stayed there sitting on her bed swinging her legs. Because the beds had gotten even higher, and even though she grew probably just a tad, her feet didn't touch the ground.

    She slid down the bed and began to get dressed into her school uniform. Once it was fit onto her, she grabbed a piece of paper and pencil. It seemed quite selfish, or low, but in her eyes, she saw an art, better than a journal or a diary. Because, it'll be specifically based on her life.
    "Ooo, this is gonna be awesome!" she grinned widely, and pressed the quil at the top of the paper.
    "...I shouldn't start in first year, that's too far back. I don't remember anything... Hmm... yes. Fourth year. A ton happened there. And I remember it all."

    And she began to write.

    Screenplay of Kelsi Cruise DRAFT ONE


    Kelsi wrote as neatly as possible. Because, this'll be conserved until she's old, and sees this. A screenplay for an act, or even a movie. That was never even USED. And based on her life in Fourth Year! She moved on to the characters. Writing down quickly all her friends, family, and pretty much everyone she could think of.
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:14 pm

    "Okay..." Kelsi thought of where to begin.
    "The beginning feast!"


    SCENE ONE

    KELSI ENTERS GREAT HALL WITH FRIENDS

    KELSI: Wow, look at the hall. I really missed it, you guys.

    ALL FRIENDS GO TO THEIR TABLE

    Camera rolls around Great Hall and slowly turns to Professor Dumbledore after the feast is finished

    PROFESSOR DUMBLEDORE: Welcome back to Hogwarts, and for some of you, wel-come to Hogwarts. I hope you have had a wonderful feast, and are set for a few announcements. First of all, to begin, there will be no Quidditch.

    HALL ERUPTS IN BOOS AND ANGRY SHOUTS

    Camera rolls to Kelsi and Libby, both looking slightly worn out form all the foor

    LIBBY: What?! That's horrible! Why would he do that?![/b]

    KELSI SIMPLY STARES IN ANGER

    PROFESSOR DUMBLEDORE: Enough, students, now for the good news. After alot of organization, and complicated meetings of the Ministry, we have decided to have the Triwizard Tournament.

    Camera rolls over Rachel, Robin, Kelsi, Serenity, Olivia, and Amanda's facial reactions

    (QUICK NOTES: Rachel: *ultimate eyeball widening* Robin: *slightly bored, confused look* Kelsi: *looks around confusedly at everyone's reaction* Serenity: *starts to ooo and clap* Olivia: *looks up from orange pudding* Amanda: *grinning widely, yet at the same time looking slightly confused*)

    END OF SCENE ONE
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:26 pm

    Kelsi set the quil down gently, and she flashed a wide grin again. Finally something to do in her spare time. Kelsi placed the paper in her bag and immediately made her way for breakfast.
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:11 pm

    Kelsi had started her script all over again.



    KELSI
    In dorm, working on her own dress robes even though she doesn't know what's going to happen with them.
    Hey, Libby, Amanda, I think I'm going to try and put my name in the Goblet of Fire.

    LIBBY
    Looks up from manga she's reading, something with metal and alkeymat.
    You should totally go for it! I mean, imagine if you made it!

    Kelsi
    sets sewing needle down.
    REALLY?! Oh, that's so awesome!


    Kelsi set the quill down.
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:17 pm

    Libby stood beside Kelsi. "Whatcha doing?"
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:21 pm

    KELSI
    sneaking through Entrance Hall dressed in a black, tight shirt that's long-sleeved and falls to her mid-thights, and underneath she's wearing leggings and black flats. She's sneaking and has a piece of paper in her hand. I can do this... I know I can... beads of sweat run down from her forehead, and she brushes them out of her concentrated eyes. Her hair is sleeked back into a high bun, and a few curly strands of hair are falling around her face. For some reason, her nose doesn't look as large, and her lips aren't as thin-looking.

    People are walking around innocently, and nobody notices her.

    KELSI
    steps over the age line that glowed a bright, intense blue, and places her name in the Goblet of Fire. She waits a moment....

    ...

    ...

    YES!!!!!!! Suddenly, glowing threads shoot out and she flies across the hall.


    Kelsi began laughing.

    she suddenly had a beard.

    END OF SCENE FOUR, DRAFT TWO.


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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:22 pm

    "LIBBY! You scared me. I'm working on something. Kind of like a diary."
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:26 pm

    "Oh, can I see?"
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:26 pm

    "BUT IT'S A DIARY."
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:28 pm

    "BUT I'M YOUR BEST FRIEND." Libby grinned.
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:28 pm

    "...It's embarrassing..."
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:30 pm

    "I won't read it, then." Libby jumped and flopped on her bed, looking up at the ceiling.
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:32 pm

    "OKAY FINE." And Kelsi began reading out that scene.
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:34 pm

    "That's supposed to be fourth year?" Libby titled her head to the side. "I don't think we were THAT hyperactive... were we?"
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:37 pm

    "Oh, you're right."

    Kelsi immediately changed it to Libby being completely against the thought, and acting rather strict. She read it out to her.
    "How's that?"
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:43 pm

    "I'm pretty sure I wasn't strict. I was more of, 'Don't do it, Kels, it's dangerous!' or something. I dunno."
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:45 pm

    "I don't really remember too. But then I get to invent."
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    Post  Libby Brown Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:46 pm

    "I guess so."
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    Post  Kelsi Cruise Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:49 pm

    Kelsi stood up. She stared at Libby. Suddenly, she pounced on Libby's bed, and began bouncing a bit.
    "I," Bouce.
    "Feel," Bounce.
    "Really," Bounce.
    "Energetic." Bounce.

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